Make section 4 more concise.
authorRichard Fontana <fontana@sharpeleven.org>
Mon, 21 Jan 2013 05:47:33 +0000 (00:47 -0500)
committerRichard Fontana <fontana@sharpeleven.org>
Mon, 21 Jan 2013 05:47:33 +0000 (00:47 -0500)
commit0da3ec817d422ab86e0fb4d86389e10f8acc6850
tree0277dcbfa9c84475c61991a80616361cfb74c68d
parent83a92622f2b400738765a5ecc293cc6f918b2955
Make section 4 more concise.

The clarification that the requirement to preserve 'Legal Notices'
applies to the extent such notices remain pertinent seems clear enough
without needing to specify, possibly incorrectly, that some reduction
of pertinence can only happen with something that is a 'Derived Work'.
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